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如何与同学相处

作者: 本刊编辑部

  我们生活在一个多彩的校园中,每天我们要接触我们的同学。因此,与同学之间有一种融洽的关系是非常必要的。你可以真诚地对待他们,热心地帮助他们,向他们展示你积极向上的风貌来影响他们。作为中学生,请你围绕着如何与同学相处这个话题展开思路谈谈你的想法。
  OW TO GET ALONG WELL WITH CLASSMATES
  9年2班张乐宇
  If we are sunflowers, classmates will be sunshine in our life. Sunflowers can get along well with sunshine. But as a middle school student, how can we get along well with classmates? These are my suggestions.
  On the one hand, smile a lot. When we often smile to them, they will love us better. Because they may think you are an outgoing person. You may be easy to get along. On the other hand, be helpful. Everyone likes helpful people around the world. If you are helpful, you’ll be popular in your life. Your life will be more and more meaningful. Finally, be honest. If you often tell lies, nobody will like you. As the saying goes,“A word spoken is past recalling.”So if you want to have a friendly relationship with others, you will be honest.
  You can follow these steps, to learn how to get along well with classmates. When we get along well with many people, we will be much happier. So don’t wait. Let’s do something to make all of our classmates to be our friends.
  本篇文章主题鲜明,结构合理,内容清楚,层次分明,字数适中,能够紧紧围绕主题“如何与同学相处”展开说明。
  文章开头运用比喻式开头,把我们比喻成太阳花,把同学们比喻成阳光。进而引出了我们与同学们的关系是要融洽相处的。从开始就吸引了读者的注意力。
  第二段运用了on the one hand, on the other hand, finally作为主题句前的提示词使得文章条理很清晰。运用了多种的说明方法,使说明的道理通俗易懂。此外,作者还引用了名言“覆水难收”来说明要诚实对人的道理。
  第三段紧紧扣着主题,并升华了主题。并呼吁人们不要等待,与同学们友好相处。
  HOW TO GET ALONG WELL WITH CLASSMATES
  9年2班阴雨晴
  better relationship can make our life colorful. As a middle school student, we will be with our classmates every day. How to get along well with them? I have some suggestions.
  First, you need to help our classmates. Everyone likes making friends with someone who helps others. If you feel like getting along well with them, you’d better help the people around you and show your love. Second, you need to understand classmates who get angry. When meeting the situations, you can give them courage. If you do like this, I believe you will get along well with them. Third, you need to show your kindness and smiles. It can make them believe in you and share their happiness and sadness with you. Your life will be colorful.
  As long as you follow the words mentioned above, you can find it easy to get along well with others. Now, show your determination and get along well with others.
  本篇作文是围绕着主题“如何与同学相处”进行书写的说明文,通篇符合说明文的特点。结构清晰合理,内容具体清楚,层次分明。作者运用语言的能力很强,能够恰当地使用各种短语,广泛地运用各种句式,如状语从句、定语从句等,文章中长短句相结合,使文章更具可读性。


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